If i dedicate/give this poem (i composed) to you, will u think i'm cheesy? :)?

Aphrodite cast a spell on me...

much stronger than Athena, has bestowed her gift on me.

I plead for the service of Hermese,

that this ardor be conveyed to the worthy one.

I aspire to be the rightful mate of Eros,

and wait till my psyche be set free.



Take me to the voyage of Odysseus .

For I will travel the cruelest sea,

just to be home with my sweet Penolope,

no matter how immense is the anguish waiting.



If the cherished has met his doom

I will be Theseus, to give breath to my flute

Enthrall Hades to his soul

Just to lay my eyes on you once more



Apology to Zeus, I seem not to discern the calling.

For the songs of sirens are beguiling.

Alluring me to shed tears with them.

They all long to be with you.



How I wish I could be Daphne, the love of Apollo…

When fate couldn’t catch me, just turn me

into a heartless and harmless tree.

Then I will love and hurt no more.

If i dedicate/give this poem (i composed) to you, will u think i'm cheesy? :)?
I personally like intellect...



it would turn me on:]



but some guys dont like it.



if you know your guy, then you know what to do.
Reply:I don't think you'll get too much applause from the Cristian's.
Reply:The fact of someone bothering to dedicate a poem to me overrides the content, of which incidentally there is much of the heart ...



A poem about the inside of a ping-pong ball would hit the spot if it had been dedicated to me.
Reply:no, because I write also. I can but don't, write them eeverywhere I go. I can write on anything, I've written over 1 hundred gospel songs. I can write on what's here, what's go9nem, even things that you bring.
Reply:girl composing poems... how cute ;)



yes, i would definetly think u are cheesy.... :D
Reply:ah no.you have talent in poetry.