Can a few people proof read this for me please?

Please help me fix the punctuation problems if you see any, and change words to different ones (if they don't make sense.)

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One way Alfred Hitchcock's film "The Birds" was changed from Daphne du Maruier's short story was in the film, there is a couple trying to survive instead of a family. This would definatley make the viewers more intrested to watch as the two strive to help eachother fight the birds throughout the movie. It makes the movie more suspenseful as it makes you ask yourself "Will they stay together?", and "Will it be hapily ever after?" Another way this film was changed to fit the golden screen was the drama throughout the movie; from Annie being jelous of Melanie because of Mitch, to Lydia not thinking anyone deserved her son.

Can a few people proof read this for me please?
I think it looks pretty good, but I did make a few changes/or suggestions you may want to use.



One way Alfred Hitchcock's film "The Birds" was changed from Daphne du Maurier's short story, was by having a couple trying to survive instead of a family. This was intended to heighten the viewers interest, as the two would strive to help each other fight off the birds. It adds to the suspense as you find yourself asking, "Will they make it out alive?", and "Will they stay together?"



Another way this film was changed to fit the golden screen was the addition of drama throughout the movie. In particular, Annie being jealous of Melanie because of Mitch, to Lydia not thinking anyone deserved her son.
Reply:One way Alfred Hitchcock's film, "The Birds" was changed from Daphne Du Maurie's short story, was in the film, there was a couple trying to survive instead of a family. This would definitely make the viewers more interested to watch as the two strive to help each other fight the birds throughout the movie. It makes the movie more suspenseful as it makes you ask yourself "Will they stay together?", and "Will it be happily ever after?" Another way this film was changed to fit the golden screen was the drama throughout the movie; from Annie being jealous of Melanie because of Mitch, to Lydia not thinking anyone deserved her son.

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